Hello fellow readers and welcome to my blogpost about the song that I made.
L.O: Create a piece of writing that describes a place of setting inspired by your song
L.O: Create a piece of writing that describes a place of setting inspired by your song
It was a beautiful Spring morning. The sun warmed my skin. I smiled to myself and felt a warm breeze of wind brush across my skin. The birds where sing a lovely harmony together . They each had beautiful coloured feathers. Like magenta and blue. There was a very calming waterfall in the background.
Wonderful writing, Felicity. You described a beautiful setting. I like how you also included some pictures to go with it. My feedback for next time would be to link the song as well! Was it your Garage Band one?
ReplyDelete- Miss Birtch
yes it was that one Miss Birtch
DeleteHi there Felicity,
ReplyDeleteI loved your post it was gorgeous, it reminded me of a pianists song, one thing that you could work on is add more punctuation e.g comas and fullstops.
-Shelby