Bonus Questions
1. Why can you not light a fire on Mars ? Because the air is to thin for the fire to start.
2. Why is Mars so cold ? Becuause the atmosphere on Mars is so rich in carbon dioxide.
I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Kia ora Felicity!
ReplyDeleteThank you for sharing your Mars DLO. I wonder if you could have a proofread of your introduction as there are some errors. Tomorrow I would like you to add more detail to the writing on your blog. Why do you think we are doing this activity? What is it going to help us with in our Science Hurumanu?
- Miss Birtch
Kia ora Miss Birtch,
DeleteThank you for the helpful comment I have added more detail to my blog post and I tried my hardest to answer your questions.
Yours sinceerely
Felicity
Great work Felicity! With more detail, your blog post flows much better. Thank you for taking on the feedback and improving your work.
Delete- Miss Birtch
Aloha Felicity,
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed reading your blog post about mars, Maybe next time you could check your writing.
Yours sincerely,
Shelby