It was a dark and blue morning at the walshes house Felicity had just left of school and her parents were at work. Suddenly I fell off the shelf and landed on the floor ''Ouch'' yelled Sally ''Are you ok Sally" Asked Jack "Im fine Jack thank you for asking" replied Sally " do you want to come on a walk outside?" asked Sally " sure" replied Jack with a smile so of they went when they got outside the sew a dog siting on the grass he was big black and white his name was Neko. He is only 3 weeks old.
Suddenly the og started chasing us around the yrad we ran up the tree for safte then a big black cat comes out of the leaves in the tree
Hi Felicity! I enjoyed reading your creative writing about the shoes. You did a nice job of using quotations marks for when your characters were speaking and telling us who was speaking by using their names. I am so keen to hear the rest of your story! Maybe we will have some time next week for finishing up! :)
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