I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Friday, March 8, 2019
Athletics Day Recount
On Thursday it was athletics day at my school.We had the choice of competitive athletics or social athletics but I chose social athletics because I did not want to do competitive athletics. The social one is gust as fun I was in Lewis. First was did shot put it was fun but it's not my favourite sport but I did it. Then we did high jump my knee hit the bar it really heart but I was ok thow my knee was bruised. After that we did runing race I did not participate because I heart my ankle.
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Hello Felicity,
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing a little bit about your athletics day. You have some really great full stops in your writing, but I think you could add a few more, or try linking you ideas with commas to make it more clear.
I hope you enjoyed athletics day!
- Miss Birtch